Best-seller Kevin J. Anderson and award-winner Cat Rambo headline the Myths & Legends Fantasy Bundle on StoryBundle.com, a huge bundle of 13 fantasy books!
That's the good news.
The bad news is that there's only one day left!
Go there NOW and grab this incredible deal before it's gone! Get a summer's worth of reading, give to charity, and support indie authors all with one small purchase.
NOW IS YOUR LAST CHANCE.
Showing posts with label fantasy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fantasy. Show all posts
Wednesday, June 6, 2018
Wednesday, May 30, 2018
Dragons, Swords, Magic, and Wizards!
The Myths and Legends Fantasy Storybundle

Kevin J. Anderson (of Dunefame, among many others) has curated a new superpack of fantasy ebooks over on storybundle, and he's invited me to take part!
These thirteen books cover a range of classic fantasy types, from epic quests, to modern retellings of classic myths, to humorous encounters with Little Folk, to lit-RPG adventures, to sea monsters, ancient curses, and saving the world. These indie-published authors include Cat Rambo, Kevin J. Anderson, Rebecca Moesta, Jody Lynn Nye, M.L. Buchman, J.T. Evans, Christopher Katava, Stefon Mears, Alex Singer, Meyari McFarland, Linda Nagata, and, yes, J. D. Brink! There’s also the Undercurrents anthology edited by Lisa Mangum, stories of “what lies beneath” (proceeds from this anthology benefit the Don Hodge Memorial Scholarship Fund for the Superstars Writing Seminar).
If you’re not familiar with how Storybundle works, you name your own price and get the whole batch instantly delivered to your e-reader. For as little as $5 you get the base bundle of five novels, or for $15 or more you will receive all 13 books, enough to keep your reading life filled with magic all through the summer and beyond.
As always with storybundle, a portion of the proceeds goes directly to benefit a charity, in this case the Challenger Learning Centers for Space Science Education. When you pick up a copy of the Myths and Legends storybundle, you’ll receive a lot of great books for around a dollar apiece, you’ll support indie authors, and contribute to a very worthwhile cause. Everybody wins!
But this bundle will be available for only a limited time. In 8 days, it goes away.
Go to https://storybundle.com/fantasy to grab this fantastic deal while it lasts!

Kevin J. Anderson (of Dunefame, among many others) has curated a new superpack of fantasy ebooks over on storybundle, and he's invited me to take part!
These thirteen books cover a range of classic fantasy types, from epic quests, to modern retellings of classic myths, to humorous encounters with Little Folk, to lit-RPG adventures, to sea monsters, ancient curses, and saving the world. These indie-published authors include Cat Rambo, Kevin J. Anderson, Rebecca Moesta, Jody Lynn Nye, M.L. Buchman, J.T. Evans, Christopher Katava, Stefon Mears, Alex Singer, Meyari McFarland, Linda Nagata, and, yes, J. D. Brink! There’s also the Undercurrents anthology edited by Lisa Mangum, stories of “what lies beneath” (proceeds from this anthology benefit the Don Hodge Memorial Scholarship Fund for the Superstars Writing Seminar).
If you’re not familiar with how Storybundle works, you name your own price and get the whole batch instantly delivered to your e-reader. For as little as $5 you get the base bundle of five novels, or for $15 or more you will receive all 13 books, enough to keep your reading life filled with magic all through the summer and beyond.
As always with storybundle, a portion of the proceeds goes directly to benefit a charity, in this case the Challenger Learning Centers for Space Science Education. When you pick up a copy of the Myths and Legends storybundle, you’ll receive a lot of great books for around a dollar apiece, you’ll support indie authors, and contribute to a very worthwhile cause. Everybody wins!
But this bundle will be available for only a limited time. In 8 days, it goes away.
Go to https://storybundle.com/fantasy to grab this fantastic deal while it lasts!
Thursday, January 19, 2017
Urban Fantasy Giveaway: One-Eyed Jacks are Wild

I've got TEN ebook copies of One-Eyed Jacks lined up to go. Simply follow the link, click the button to follow me on Amazon (meaning you'll get an email from Amazon when I have new releases, stuff like that), and then sit back and relax.
Ten winners will be drawn from all entrants on February 1st. And then, well... if you're one of the lucky ten, you'll have yourself a free ebook. Easy as that!
Clock's ticking. Draw your lucky card right now. You've got nothing to lose!
BTW, anyone notice this blog doesn't do much anymore? That's 'cuz I've move all the action to another place: new website here!
Wednesday, October 19, 2016
Evolution of a Book Cover
This is a post that's actually over on my new website. I wanted to copy and paste it over here too, but the images just make such a task too BIG. So here's a link. Check it out!
Friday, August 26, 2016
TWO GREAT DEALS ON SCIENCE FICTION AND FANTASY: BUNDLING AND KICKSTARTER

Beginning August 15th, you can get 16 exciting science fiction titles worth $69 for as little as $9.99! I’m talking about the “Out of This World” ebook bundle on Bundle Rabbit.
Bundled books include works from best-selling authors Kristine Kathryn Rusch and Dean Wesley Smith, Douglas Smith, Blaze Ward, and even me! You can choose your own price and donate some to charity. It’s win-win!
Stock up on your fall reading right now for less, because this amazing deal will only be around for a limited time.


The Kickstarter for Cirsova issues #3 and #4 is up and accepting all comers! There are rewards to be had for both meager and generous contributions, not the least of which is knowing that you’re supporting a quarterly indie magazine and the authors who publish within its pages.
I myself, Captain Leonidas Hawksblood, am one such author. Or rather, one such lively buccaneer of the Vast Empty Sea. Join me and my crew—Mister Pug, Soot, Pidgeon, Spleen, and Comely John—aboard the Lion’s Share as we venture off for daring-do across the black canvas of stars. Assuming The Lion’s engines don’t fail us and torpedo tubes can spit for all their worth.
Rewards via Kickstarter are greater than those without, so don’t delay! You can’t get a better piece of the pie without stealing it, and then you’ll be running for the rest of your days. Trust me, I’d know!
Sunday, August 14, 2016
Sci-Fi Fantasy Kickstarter: Pirates, Pulp Fiction, and Planetary Adventures

The Kickstarter for Cirsova issues #3 and #4 is up and accepting all comers! There are rewards to be had for both meager and generous contributions, not the least of which is knowing that you’re supporting a quarterly indie magazine and the authors who publish within its pages.
I myself, Captain Leonidas Hawksblood, am one such author. Or rather, one such lively buccaneer of the Vast Empty Sea. Join me and my crew—Mister Pug, Soot, Pidgeon, Spleen, and Comely John—aboard the Lion’s Share as we venture off for daring-do across the black canvas of stars. Assuming The Lion’s engines don’t fail us and torpedo tubes can spit for all their worth.
Rewards via Kickstarter are greater than those without, so don’t delay! You can’t get a better piece of the pie without stealing it, and then you’ll be running for the rest of your days. Trust me, I’d know!
**Note that this is one of the LAST POSTINGS on this blog. Everything is moving to my new site (just remove the "blogspot" from the address): http://brinkschaostheory.com
Please join me there for further adventures!
Wednesday, June 29, 2016
Epic Coming of Age Fantasy on Kindle Unlimited
For a limited summer engagement, Tarnish: Thunderstrike Edition is now on Kindle Unlimited. This extended edition includes the 400 page novel and the prequel novella, The Prince of Luster and Decay in one volume. Click here to find it on Amazon.
Here are the quick-version blurbs:
Tarnish
Billy Cole is the
sixteen-springs-old son of Ian the Black. Being the heir of a legend is a heavy burden
to bear, and though he wears it well, it takes more than strength to become a
man. And more than a sword to become a hero. When evil rises from the Blood Marsh, Wil
Thunderstrike gets his chance at both. Epic
fantasy on a more personal scale.
The Prince of Luster
and Decay
Sergeant Knox leads the Head
Knockers, scout-saboteurs in the war against the Dread Duke and his armies. After an ambush
kills half the company, Knox and his boys are sent on a final mission to
investigate the possible source. And
though the town appears empty, something waits for them there in the
darkness. And they’ll need both heart
and steel to defeat it.
Saturday, June 4, 2016
D&D 5E: New Titles Via Dungeon Masters Guild
Hey there, fellow nerdites. I'm happy to announce that I now have two pdf ebooks on Wizards of the Coast's Dungeon Masters Guild. The Guild is a marketplace where players can contribute to the gaming community by publishing material through OneBookShelf and their consortium of gaming companies. There is a cornucopia of D&D material to be found there, with prices ranging from free, to a few dollars, to paying whatever you think is fair.
What I have decided is fair is $1.99 for each of mine, which is less than I'd charge for an equivalent work of fiction, given the word counts and amount of time I put into them. One is a full story adventure module in a creepy small town. The other is a source book with new feats, custom rules, and new ways to imagine existing character classes, without having to reinvent the rules for them.
Here's what I mean:
Contained herein are more than 40
pages featuring customized game rules, a new, story-based experience system
that does away with tracking math, and 17 powerful feats for players. But
that’s not all.
Presented for your inspiration are 10 complete characters created from new takes on existing classes, all forged via enhanced creation rules that favor player characters. Each hero features stats, background stories, and character-building decisions spelled out to give you new ideas for your PCs and NPCs. Examples include an archetype-defying Cthulhu warlock, steampunk mage, Shinto samurai, and rogue spymaster.
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Check 'em out and let me know if you have any questions or suggestions!
What I have decided is fair is $1.99 for each of mine, which is less than I'd charge for an equivalent work of fiction, given the word counts and amount of time I put into them. One is a full story adventure module in a creepy small town. The other is a source book with new feats, custom rules, and new ways to imagine existing character classes, without having to reinvent the rules for them.
Here's what I mean:
The simple townsfolk of
Jersey Shore generally keep to themselves.
Neighbors might describe them as quiet cow herders, able fishermen, and
pious church-goers. If they had
neighbors. In fact, no one who visits Jersey
Shore ever has anything to say. Because visitors
never leave.
This adventure is for early
level player characters (levels 2-4), and will require one or two play sessions
to complete. Slip it into your campaign
as an unfortunate pit stop in any D&D realm and enjoy an evening chock full
of action, monsters, mystery, and humor.
Fantasy/SF writer J. D. Brink
ran this adventure with his own D&D players based on just a few scribbled
notes. Now after weeks of further
development, it’s ready for your team of D&D heroes. Are they up to the challenge?
A cup of coffee these days costs
four bucks. An evening full of
adventure: half as much.
Presented for your inspiration are 10 complete characters created from new takes on existing classes, all forged via enhanced creation rules that favor player characters. Each hero features stats, background stories, and character-building decisions spelled out to give you new ideas for your PCs and NPCs. Examples include an archetype-defying Cthulhu warlock, steampunk mage, Shinto samurai, and rogue spymaster.
Fantasy author J. D. Brink first discovered Dungeons & Dragons
more thirty years ago. Finally, with the advent of the Dungeon Masters’
Guild, he can now share some of his own ideas and game innovations with fellow
players of the world’s greatest roleplaying game. The 5eCC works in
conjunction with your own imagination to
develop exciting new worlds and the heroes needed to save them!
A cup of coffee these days costs
four bucks. Endless possibilities for
your games: half as much.
Saturday, April 16, 2016
Fantasy Audiobook Review and Giveaway
Audiobook Reviewer has listened to and posted a review of Tarnish: The Complete Trilogy Edition.
The general impression: "This was a surprisingly excellent fantasy coming of age story." (4.5 stars)
I'm assuming the "surprising" part is because it was so much better than the average run-of-the-mill stuff, not because she expected it to be bad...
Clicking any of the these hyperlinked lines will take you to their site to read the review. And if you scroll down, you'll find there's also a giveaway for 5 free Audible.com downloads on the site!
So why not read the review and enter to win your own 15-hour fantasy adventure? It's win-win!
Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Urban Fantasy Story Free for Readers!
Good new, bad news.
My short story "Moondance" has now posted on Crimson Streets! You can click here and read it now!
Bad news is that the editors have informed me that the illustrator that was supposed to do the artwork to go with my story didn't follow through. Very disappointing, as I was looking forward to seeing what they came up with...
Oh well. The story's still there! It's a fun little Halloween-style tale. Enjoy!
Wednesday, March 23, 2016
Fantasy Novel for 99 Cents!
The first installment of my Tarnish Trilogy, The Quest, is now on sale for $0.99 through the end of April.
Click these for quick links to Amazon, B&N, and just about everywhere else.
You can also get the whole shebang in one volume--Tarnish, the Complete Trilogy Edition--as an ebook, paperback, or audiobook. (And it's ultimately cheaper that way.)
Here's quick links for the complete Tarnish on Amazon, B&N, and just about everywhere else.
Enjoy!
Sunday, December 6, 2015
Tarnish: Fantasy Trilogy
My coming-of-age, fantasy novel Tarnish is now available in trilogy form! The whole thing is certainly still available
in its full 130,000 word unabridged version (as an ebook, paperback, and
audiobook), but since that’s equivalent to three regular novels anyway, I
thought I might as well break it down into its three “acts” and see what
happens. So readers can pick up the same
novel that’s been out there, or they can try it in a smaller series of books
with some cool new covers (which were great fun to make).
Here’s each book’s cover and individual description:
Silver,
they call it, the light of the full moon: celestial magic that changes men into
beasts and calls the dead from their graves... and young men to their destiny.
Billy Cole is the son of legendary
folk hero Ian the Black. He should be
marching to war, battling dragons, and rescuing fair maidens. Unfortunately for him, the war is long over,
the last dragon was slain by the Dread Duke, and all the girls in Redfield are either
several years younger than him or already married. Billy is sixteen springs old and ready for a
life of valor and excitement. So far,
however, he seems destined only for boredom and manual labor in a small farm
town.
Then a scarecrow tries to kill him
and a monster of swamp water and vines trudges into town and attacks his father. Evil has risen from the Blood Marsh and
Redfield needs a hero.
And while Billy has the brass to
take on an entire army alone, he’s smart enough to know better. Instead, he straps on the sword of Trevor the
Red and takes the name Wil Thunderstrike—wandering hero and teller of tales—to
venture into the Free Fertile Lands and find the help they need.
But the world beyond Redfield isn’t
like in the tavern tales, and not everyone who carries a sword is a hero.
Tarnish
is a grittier coming of age tale than you’re used to, where destiny is forged,
not written.
Wil Thunderstrike’s journey into legend continues…
Forging ahead despite his earlier
failures, Wil Thunderstrike arrives in the shadowy city of Fellwater in search
of his prey, the bandit Mad Dog McCray.
And seeking the heroes he needs to save his hometown, of course.
Though it’s easy to get distracted
in a place like Fellwater. Gambling on
boxing matches and chasing a flirtatious pickpocket prove to be dangerous forms
of entertainment. Wil soon finds that
he’s making more enemies than friends.
Meanwhile, back in Redfield, Trevor
and Ian fight to hold off the Blood Marsh and to hold the town together. Farmers and tradesmen, however, make poor soldiers
and in this small war, there will be casualties.
But all is not lost. Wil meets a rival storyteller who promises to
introduce him to just the kind of hero he’s looking for to save his home.
And only then do the real trials of
William Thunderstrike begin.
The making of William Thunderstrike concludes in this action-packed
volume.
Billy Cole—formerly Wil
Thunderstrike, now the warrior Lockheed—has started down a new heroic career
path as one of León Shimmerskin’s champions.
But the illustrious tales of the Colors Three never prepared him for his
new patron’s particular brand of justice. The path of the traveling hero, it seems, is
darker than he’d imagined.
When he at last returns to
Redfield, Lockheed must face the tragedies that have befallen his home and its
people. And by his own actions, he will either
prevent or bring about even more of them.
The final battle for Redfield is
coming, and it will decide not only the fate of Billy Cole’s home, but that of
his soul as well.
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This series is available only in ebook form at all major
retailers: The Quest ($0.99), Among the Shadows ($2.99) and Heroes and Villains ($2.99).
Wednesday, November 18, 2015
Free and Discounted Fantasy Fiction: Final Phase of the Fall Fallout
Wow, that's a lot of F's.
This is the final week of my "Fall Fallout Campaign" during which I've been running discounts on almost all of my ebooks. I don't expect to be running any deals for quite some time, so get them while you can!
My 400-page fantasy novel Tarnish is just 0.99 (dollars or pounds, US or UK) right now through the 22nd. You can find it on Amazon by clicking here now.
You can also pick up The Prince of Luster and Decay, a Tarnish prequel story, for FREE through the 22nd. Find it on Amazon right now by clicking here.
Only a few days left!
This is the final week of my "Fall Fallout Campaign" during which I've been running discounts on almost all of my ebooks. I don't expect to be running any deals for quite some time, so get them while you can!
My 400-page fantasy novel Tarnish is just 0.99 (dollars or pounds, US or UK) right now through the 22nd. You can find it on Amazon by clicking here now.
Being a hero isn’t as easy as the tavern
tales would have you believe.
Billy Cole has
always been a quick study, be it at telling tales, brewing ale, or
swordplay.
And yet it
surprises Wil Thunderstrike, his alter ego, at just how hard and fast the
lessons come on his first venture into the real world of back-alley thieves,
traveling talespinners, and warriors of renown.
Wil’s quest is
to find epic heroes to save his home town, but it'll
take more than a sword and the inspiring tales of his legendary idols to
survive the harsh world beyond Redfield.
And the further he travels into the night, the darker he gets.
Tarnish is a grittier coming-of-age
story than you’re used to, where destiny is forged, not written.
What kind of
hero would you be?
You can also pick up The Prince of Luster and Decay, a Tarnish prequel story, for FREE through the 22nd. Find it on Amazon right now by clicking here.
In war, men don't only fight the enemy. Sometimes they must also fight
themselves.
Sergeant Knox leads the Head
Knockers, a unit of scout-saboteurs in the war against the Dread Duke and his
armies. They are the favorite squad among Captain Brighton’s Stormwalkers,
until an ambush kills the Captain, half the company, and Knox’s best men.
Now the new Captain has new
orders. He’s sending the Head Knockers
to investigate the possible source of the attack. The town they find appears empty, but there’s
something waiting for them there. And they’ll
need both heart and steel to defeat it.
This stand alone, sword and
soldiery novella gives a glimpse into history of the fantasy novel Tarnish.
Only a few days left!
Sunday, October 11, 2015
Halloween Reading Giveaway: Dark Fantasy Double Feature
Now through October 25th, you can enter to win a free paperback version of my dark fantasy double feature, The Prince and the Darkness. 'Tis the season for a great Halloween read! And this one combines two of my previous works of dark fantasy and horror. The description follows, right after this link to the Goodreads page, where you can sign up to have me send you one of four signed copies:
The Prince and the Darkness combines A Long Walk Down a Dark Alley and The Prince of Luster and Decay into one bargain-priced volume.
The first four short stories feature wise guys and private eyes, black magic, bleak futures, and the feminine wiles of inhuman beauties. Your imagination will flicker with the atmospheric images of mobsters and monsters, all cast in black and white—and red.
These deliciously dark tales are followed by a lengthy novelette of sword and soldiery warfare, where the enemy isn’t just fought on battlefields, but in the soul as well.
Both originals are also available as ebooks, paperbacks, and richly-told audiobooks.
Wednesday, August 26, 2015
Kindle Unlimited: Hugh Howey, Free Books, and My Compromise
Indie writer and poster child Hugh Howey recently wrote an article about what a "knockout" Amazon has scored with their new Kindle Unlimited subscription program. I, personally, have mixed feelings, as I know a lot of people do.
For Hugh's post, just click here.
I have ultimately decided to post three of my smaller works on KU as well (which are pretty much free to download if you have a subscription), which I'll show in a minute.
First, this is the gist of the comment I posted on Hugh's blog, which is the argument and compromise I ended up making with myself:
I’m in the same boat as many: I have objections to Amazon becoming the all-powerful dictator of the industry and to exclusivity, but, gee, it’d sure be nice to sell some books, too. Thanks, Hugh, for this article, which has started me thinking.
Points I’m considering:
1. Obviously, I’m against giving all the ebook power to one retailer, no matter how nice their product, or how good their business savvy. I’m also against making my own work only available to their customers and not to others.
2. When the whole “pay per page” thing first came out, my first reaction was, “Amazon’s cheaping out on us again.” And that hasn’t changed in my mind. I assume they’re making a killing and passing the loose coins onto us, the sacrificial writers.
1. Obviously, I’m against giving all the ebook power to one retailer, no matter how nice their product, or how good their business savvy. I’m also against making my own work only available to their customers and not to others.
2. When the whole “pay per page” thing first came out, my first reaction was, “Amazon’s cheaping out on us again.” And that hasn’t changed in my mind. I assume they’re making a killing and passing the loose coins onto us, the sacrificial writers.
On the other hand:
1. The subscription service buffet is a nice way for readers to experiment on authors and books they might not otherwise give a try.
2. Some books just don’t seem to sell well, no matter how many retailers we have them on, most notably the shorter works. And, yes, Amazon sells more than all the others combined. Only one month did I sell more on B&N than on Amazon.
1. The subscription service buffet is a nice way for readers to experiment on authors and books they might not otherwise give a try.
2. Some books just don’t seem to sell well, no matter how many retailers we have them on, most notably the shorter works. And, yes, Amazon sells more than all the others combined. Only one month did I sell more on B&N than on Amazon.
So between my conscience, my feeble sense of business, and my need to reach more readers, here’s the compromise I’ve come up with while reading this article and everyone's comments:
I think I’ll pull some of my shorter books that don’t sell well anyway, throw them up exclusively on KU for a little while, and see how they do. The shorter page counts won’t yield much raw income, but maybe they’ll serve as “free samples” that will drive readers toward my full-length books, which they can purchase for a full-book price rather than fractional cents per page. And I’ll leave these primary books non-exclusive (which do sell, at least a little, with other retailers) so I’m not cutting out non-Amazon customers and I’m not willingly handing one company the fate of the universe.
I think I’ll pull some of my shorter books that don’t sell well anyway, throw them up exclusively on KU for a little while, and see how they do. The shorter page counts won’t yield much raw income, but maybe they’ll serve as “free samples” that will drive readers toward my full-length books, which they can purchase for a full-book price rather than fractional cents per page. And I’ll leave these primary books non-exclusive (which do sell, at least a little, with other retailers) so I’m not cutting out non-Amazon customers and I’m not willingly handing one company the fate of the universe.
A good compromise for me, and a fun experiment to see how things change.
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For those who don't know, the KU program is great for readers, but not necessarily for writers. We often end up getting far less in royalties than we would have had the reader purchased the ebook normally, and we get paid per page read, not for the book itself. (What kind of Big Brother shit is involved in tracking how many pages you read, I don't know...)
But, because of the reasons I outlined above, I'm going to give this a try. So what books have a sacrificed for this experimental cause? My three shortest ebooks, and I'm considering posting a couple more novelettes in the superhero vein in the not-too-distant future.
Click here to find their homes on Amazon:
Monday, August 17, 2015
Blurb Doctor: Writing Book Blurbs and Descriptions
Like most other writers, I am
not confident in my blurb-writing ability.
“Blurb,” for those of you who
might not know, refers to the little description of a book or story that you
read on the ebook site or the back of the book.
It’s the “sales copy,” the brief squirt of information that tells you
what the book is about, just enough to get you interested without ruining the
whole story for you. And it’s hard to
do.
Recently, writing guru DeanWesley Smith has blogging about this very topic, which has been very helpful
for me. Even though I don’t find all the
blurbs he’s been giving as examples all that alluring, at least the principles
are there. He uses a basic, general
structure, and comments on others’ blurb-writing philosophies as well. Strangely timely in its release, BookBub also published an article with some tips.
So taking a page from these notes on the subject, I’ve been reworking some of my own. The main principle I’ve been in serious
violation of has been don’t give away the
whole plot. After all, what’s the
fun reading something if you already know what’s going to happen. It’s like reading a story about the Titanic; you know how it’s going to end.
I’ve come up with a loose
structure now that I’m trying out, based on DWS’s examples. Though contrary his form, I’ve added taglines
to the beginning. Something to catch
your attention, like on a movie poster; some bite-sized, quick-to-sample bait
that gets the reader to the next paragraph.
Hopefully it works.
So my experimental structure
is kind of like this:
1. Tagline. (If I have one
worth trying. If not, skip it.)
2. Character/world intro. (Along
with the cover, also points to the genre.)
3. Introduce plotline/conflict,
but only up to the first page/chapter.
4. Raise the
stakes/cliffhanger (if not done in #3) or give additional incentive to read
this.
Each of these should be kept
short, so the whole thing is short. For
Smashwords, you also have to provide a 400 character version, which is damn
good practice for keeping it brief, and I use the same blurb in my back-of-book
Fugitive Fiction Library listings. I have
read some advice from one online market saying that the more you give in your
description, the better. But that’s
contrary to what DWS and others are saying, and I tend to agree with them. I think the blurb should be short, easy to
digest, and just offer enough to pique a reader’s interest.
Applying these new
principles, here’s a few of revamps.
The Thorne Legacy
He'll be
court-martialed. If he lives that long.
Corporal Cranston Thorne is
the black sheep of the family and about to be kicked out of System Guard for
his selfish and reckless behavior.
His father, Captain Thanos
Thorne, would like nothing more than to see that happen. Unfortunately, he can’t stay for the
trial. A remote outpost at the edge of
the system has gone silent and he must take the fleet out to investigate.
The real danger, however, isn’t
at the edge of the system...
A Writers of the Future
contest finalist.
Tarnish
Being a hero isn’t as easy as the
tavern tales would have you believe.
Billy Cole has always been a quick
study, be it at telling tales, brewing ale, or swordplay.
And yet it surprises Wil
Thunderstrike, his alter ego, at just how hard and fast the lessons come on his
first venture into the real world of back-alley thieves, traveling
talespinners, and warriors of renown.
Wil’s quest is to find epic heroes
to save his home town, but it'll take more than a
sword and the inspiring tales of his legendary idols to survive the harsh world
beyond Redfield. And the further
he travels into the night, the darker he gets.
Tarnish is a
grittier coming-of-age story than you’re used to, where destiny is forged, not
written.
What kind of hero would you be?
The Prince of Luster and Decay
In war, men don't only fight
the enemy. Sometimes they must also fight themselves.
Sergeant Knox leads the Head
Knockers, a unit of scout-saboteurs in the war against the Dread Duke and his
armies. They are the favorite squad among Captain Brighton’s Stormwalkers,
until an ambush kills the Captain, half the company, and Knox’s best men.
Now the new Captain has new
orders. He’s sending the Head Knockers
to investigate the possible source of the attack. The town they find appears empty, but there’s
something waiting for them there. And
they’ll need both heart and steel to defeat it.
This stand alone, sword and
soldiery novella gives a glimpse into history of the fantasy novel Tarnish.
*
How did I do? Any suggestions?
This last one I didn’t change
at all. I’ve already hurt myself too
many times trying to fix things that weren’t broken, so I exercised restraint
this time. I’m just including here as
another example. The first line here is
more about including key words and comparison stuff to say, “If you like these,
you’ll like this too.” The tagline is
the second paragraph.
Hungry Gods
Avengers and
Watchmen meet The Walking Dead and Pulp
Fiction. Spandex adventures for
adults.
Superheroes. Undead.
‘Nuff said.
The
country’s premier superhero team is missing.
So when a mutant monstrosity goes on the rampage, it’s Spitball to the
rescue! He’s a third-string hero today,
determined to be first-string tomorrow.
And the Army may be giving him just the chance he needs. Spitball’s been invited to undertake a secret
mission into America’s heartland. What
he’s about to discover, however, is not a chance at stardom but a horror movie
come to life...
Hungry Gods is a fast-paced adventure of costumed superheroes,
government conspiracy theories, and flesh-eating zombies.
*
I am far from an expert, but
I thought I’d share my learning process with the world and see if anyone else
has some advice, or maybe even benefits from my experiments.
In either case, let me know!
Wednesday, June 10, 2015
Top Blogger's Fantasy Review of Tarnish
Some time ago I submitted Tarnish to a big book review blog-off, initiated by celebrated fantasy writer Mark Lawrence, author of the Broken Empire series. My book went in a big batch of others to Bob R Milne, who has a reputation as a big-time book reviewer. You can see his shining review of Tarnish and four more indie book here: Beauty in Ruins.
Here's what he had to say about Tarnish:
This is a very odd book to talk about - on the surface, it just shouldn’t work. We have multiple narrators, between whom we switch more for narrative effect than the needs of the story. We have a distinct coming-of-age story (which I’ve long since grown tired of), where the hero hides behind the persona of who he’d like to be. We have storytelling within the story, a kind of intrusive info-dumping that interferes with the forward progression of the plot. Finally, we have a plot that seems to wander without a clear direction for much of the book, before suddenly finding its direction and racing to a climax.
Despite all that, it worked. The narrative was strong – from the language, to the dialogue, to the imagery. Brink isn’t afraid to write lengthy paragraphs and scenes, to take his time setting things up, and to show us his world. That, to me, is engaging. It draws me in, makes me read a bit more closely, and gives the appearance of depth (which, it must be said, is not merely appearance). As for the characters, the hardest aspect of writing a novel is to encourage that immediate emotional connection, to draw readers in, and make them care - and Brink does that very well. I liked Billy from the first time we met. He interested me, intrigued me, and made me want to know more about him. There was this welcome duality to him that allowed him to play the hero very well, even as he grew into the role. It’s less a coming-of-age tale and more a story of self-discovery.
There’s a lot of imagination and fantasy flourishes here as well that really caught my attention. Even small, throw-away scenes like the dream of monsters inside the tavern are full of fantastic detail, allowing you to not just ‘see’ the danger but ‘feel’ it as well. That element of storytelling within the story really won me over. It allows for things to get a bit wild, a bit over-the-top, without dragging down the credibility of the entire story. We expect people to embellish their tales of heroism because we want to be entertained as much as we want to be informed, and Brink clearly understands that.
It’s not just mindless heroism and adventure, however. There’s also a heart to the novel, a very self-aware sort of appreciation for humanity and the horrors of war. Towards the end of the story, Billy stands before an advancing army of swamp monsters and asks himself, “How monstrous can they be if they mourn?” It’s a good question, and it leads into the final evolution of Wil (the hero) coming to terms with being Billy (the boy). Sure, I would have liked a little more world building, and I would have liked more of a sense of the wider world, but those are minor quibbles to be resolved in a second book. All-in-all, Tarnish is a solid tale, a classic sort of heroic adventure that’s really pulls all the elements together in a satisfying resolution.
Here's what he had to say about Tarnish:
This is a very odd book to talk about - on the surface, it just shouldn’t work. We have multiple narrators, between whom we switch more for narrative effect than the needs of the story. We have a distinct coming-of-age story (which I’ve long since grown tired of), where the hero hides behind the persona of who he’d like to be. We have storytelling within the story, a kind of intrusive info-dumping that interferes with the forward progression of the plot. Finally, we have a plot that seems to wander without a clear direction for much of the book, before suddenly finding its direction and racing to a climax.
Despite all that, it worked. The narrative was strong – from the language, to the dialogue, to the imagery. Brink isn’t afraid to write lengthy paragraphs and scenes, to take his time setting things up, and to show us his world. That, to me, is engaging. It draws me in, makes me read a bit more closely, and gives the appearance of depth (which, it must be said, is not merely appearance). As for the characters, the hardest aspect of writing a novel is to encourage that immediate emotional connection, to draw readers in, and make them care - and Brink does that very well. I liked Billy from the first time we met. He interested me, intrigued me, and made me want to know more about him. There was this welcome duality to him that allowed him to play the hero very well, even as he grew into the role. It’s less a coming-of-age tale and more a story of self-discovery.
There’s a lot of imagination and fantasy flourishes here as well that really caught my attention. Even small, throw-away scenes like the dream of monsters inside the tavern are full of fantastic detail, allowing you to not just ‘see’ the danger but ‘feel’ it as well. That element of storytelling within the story really won me over. It allows for things to get a bit wild, a bit over-the-top, without dragging down the credibility of the entire story. We expect people to embellish their tales of heroism because we want to be entertained as much as we want to be informed, and Brink clearly understands that.
It’s not just mindless heroism and adventure, however. There’s also a heart to the novel, a very self-aware sort of appreciation for humanity and the horrors of war. Towards the end of the story, Billy stands before an advancing army of swamp monsters and asks himself, “How monstrous can they be if they mourn?” It’s a good question, and it leads into the final evolution of Wil (the hero) coming to terms with being Billy (the boy). Sure, I would have liked a little more world building, and I would have liked more of a sense of the wider world, but those are minor quibbles to be resolved in a second book. All-in-all, Tarnish is a solid tale, a classic sort of heroic adventure that’s really pulls all the elements together in a satisfying resolution.
Saturday, June 6, 2015
Writing in 2015: May Recap - Dark Fantasy, Superheroes, and Sex with Aliens
I keep checking my email for news, but there's no news to be had. I'm checking my sales numbers every day, which are doing great and holding steady, but not on any dramatic upward rise. How can they be when I'm not writing anything new? I realized the other day that sitting idle and not creating new stuff is driving me crazy! That's why I'm antsy and doing the same pointless routine crap everyday with no new results. Because I'm stagnant. I need to be moving forward, onto the next book! But it's not for lack of material...
Unfortunately my creative endeavors are on hold for a little while. I have one month to accomplish two months worth of pre-deployment paperwork, planning, and training, and then I'll be in training for two to three more months before shipping out to Afghanistan. Real life is dropping a bomb on writing life (hopefully not literally). Once again, it's time to reassess and draw up new plans and expectations.
The month of May was far from a loss, however.
I had my most successful book signing/sales event to date. Each one I have turns out better than the last. This one was on-base here in Japan at a big semi-annual bazaar. I doubled the sales from my last one back in Texas, and am quite happy with that, though I still didn't get all the business I was expecting. I was hoping all the young guys and gals from the ships would come through looking for books to read before they set sail, but that didn't really happen.
The biggest draw for the bazaar is Asian furniture and knickknacks, which appeals more to married folks with housing; I don't think my potential readers who sleep on a 3" x 6" rack were expecting a SF/F author to be set-up in there. I also got a bit screwed because a big box of Hungry Gods didn't arrive in time for the event, and I sold out of what I had pretty quickly. Postal system from the States runs slow, especially for big heavy boxes.
I also, believe it or not, sold some ebooks from my table! I had some certificates printed up which I filled out with Smashwords coupon codes that the customers could use once they got home, paying a discounted rate at the sale. Worked out great!
I actually intended to write up a big post about my thoughts on the event and holding signings in general, but who's got the time?! Not me, unfortunately. Working 13-hour ER shifts, preparing for war, and spending time with the fam leaves little time for blogging.
This month I also got two more books into paperback editions: Dreams of Flying and The Prince and the Darkness. Both retail for $11.99, and they have a combined total of 360 pages, two novellas, six short stories, and two different sneak-peeks at Hungry Gods. Great fun in bite-sized packaging.
(The "sex with aliens" from the title of this post, by the way, refers to the short novel Invasion inside Dreams of Flying. The life of a superhero... *Sigh*)
As I posted and "tweeted" about previously, May also saw my heroic fantasy, coming-of-age novel Tarnish published in an audiobook edition. It's 15 hours of awesome storytelling narrated by Todd Menesses, who lives in New Orleans but sounds like he's from fantasy England.
What about my stats and word count recap? Well, just as I start getting into a good routine, some earthquake hits and screws up my nice trend. (We did, in fact, have two earthquakes here this month, too, but I'm referring to the deployment.) I will leave here in July and not return to my home and family until well into next year. So there goes my 12,000 words a month goal and the nice streak I had going.
Aside from the nice accomplishments above, I did get 5300 words written in May, some of it on the next story I intend to float around to magazines. But the blog series I started this year may be ending right here and now. I'll continue to track any work I get done, but I probably won't be spending any more precious time blogging about it. My writing efforts are about to get much more focused, and things like marketing, social media, etc. will be taking a seat even further to the rear than they already have been. Doing these things take time away from the most important aspect of writing: WRITING!
(In fact, it amazes me how much time and energy I see spent on Facebook and Twitter by people who say they are "writers" -- when do they write stories or books if they're always online gossiping?)
So that's my "writing recap" and probably the last of that series. But looking to the future:
I still hope to write Twilight of the Gods by the end of the year, which is the prequel to Hungry Gods and Identity Crisis: Book Two.
And I continue to simplify and focus my writing career goals looking forward. I think if I do these rather easy things for the foreseeable future, I'll be doing pretty damn well for myself:
1. Publish 2 to 3 books a year, every year.
Period. This year I've already gotten out Hungry Gods, The Prince and the Darkness, and Dreams of Flying, and it's just now June!
2. Double my overall sales from one year to the next.
This one I have less direct control over, but I think it's a realistic and ultimately successful expectation. I figure if this trend does continue--selling twice as many books this year as last year, and twice as many next year as now--then I could be making a decent living from writing in about five years, maybe even enough to ween myself off of a day job. Not a Hollywood, one-in-a-million instant best-seller story, but a realistic goal and certainly one I can live with.
Increasing the availability and media forms of my work help accomplish this. This means not being exclusive to one outlet (*cough*cough* Amazon *cough*) and diversifying with ebooks, paperbacks, and audiobook versions, as well as writing in multiple genres.
3. Continue to work both sides of the fence: indie publishing and getting stories into magazines and anthologies. My story "Green-Eyed Monster" has been picked up for Meerkat Press's "Love Hurts Anthology" and I have a couple more in circulation with high expectations.
4. Focus on the single most important aspect of writing: WRITING.
But what about marketing?! you might ask. In my opinion, over-rated. But if you want to make real money, start up your own indie book marketing outfit. I bet the marketing side of the indie author boom is making five-times what indie authors themselves are making. Every Tom, Dick, and Harry has their own "book marketing and tweeting service" that they're happy to let you pay them for. And I'm not convinced they help all that much. But that's just me.
When I get half a million words out there, I'll start marketing. Until then, what's the point?
Okay, that's it for me. This post has been two or three that I've had in mind combined to "save time," but I've sure been out here on the patio typing away for a long time. In fact, the sun is now cloaked behind some grey clouds and a nice, moist breeze. Looks like rain...
Unfortunately my creative endeavors are on hold for a little while. I have one month to accomplish two months worth of pre-deployment paperwork, planning, and training, and then I'll be in training for two to three more months before shipping out to Afghanistan. Real life is dropping a bomb on writing life (hopefully not literally). Once again, it's time to reassess and draw up new plans and expectations.
The month of May was far from a loss, however.
*Photo from a couple years--and books-- ago. Not this event.*
I had my most successful book signing/sales event to date. Each one I have turns out better than the last. This one was on-base here in Japan at a big semi-annual bazaar. I doubled the sales from my last one back in Texas, and am quite happy with that, though I still didn't get all the business I was expecting. I was hoping all the young guys and gals from the ships would come through looking for books to read before they set sail, but that didn't really happen.
The biggest draw for the bazaar is Asian furniture and knickknacks, which appeals more to married folks with housing; I don't think my potential readers who sleep on a 3" x 6" rack were expecting a SF/F author to be set-up in there. I also got a bit screwed because a big box of Hungry Gods didn't arrive in time for the event, and I sold out of what I had pretty quickly. Postal system from the States runs slow, especially for big heavy boxes.
I also, believe it or not, sold some ebooks from my table! I had some certificates printed up which I filled out with Smashwords coupon codes that the customers could use once they got home, paying a discounted rate at the sale. Worked out great!
I actually intended to write up a big post about my thoughts on the event and holding signings in general, but who's got the time?! Not me, unfortunately. Working 13-hour ER shifts, preparing for war, and spending time with the fam leaves little time for blogging.
This month I also got two more books into paperback editions: Dreams of Flying and The Prince and the Darkness. Both retail for $11.99, and they have a combined total of 360 pages, two novellas, six short stories, and two different sneak-peeks at Hungry Gods. Great fun in bite-sized packaging.
(The "sex with aliens" from the title of this post, by the way, refers to the short novel Invasion inside Dreams of Flying. The life of a superhero... *Sigh*)
As I posted and "tweeted" about previously, May also saw my heroic fantasy, coming-of-age novel Tarnish published in an audiobook edition. It's 15 hours of awesome storytelling narrated by Todd Menesses, who lives in New Orleans but sounds like he's from fantasy England.
What about my stats and word count recap? Well, just as I start getting into a good routine, some earthquake hits and screws up my nice trend. (We did, in fact, have two earthquakes here this month, too, but I'm referring to the deployment.) I will leave here in July and not return to my home and family until well into next year. So there goes my 12,000 words a month goal and the nice streak I had going.
Aside from the nice accomplishments above, I did get 5300 words written in May, some of it on the next story I intend to float around to magazines. But the blog series I started this year may be ending right here and now. I'll continue to track any work I get done, but I probably won't be spending any more precious time blogging about it. My writing efforts are about to get much more focused, and things like marketing, social media, etc. will be taking a seat even further to the rear than they already have been. Doing these things take time away from the most important aspect of writing: WRITING!
(In fact, it amazes me how much time and energy I see spent on Facebook and Twitter by people who say they are "writers" -- when do they write stories or books if they're always online gossiping?)
So that's my "writing recap" and probably the last of that series. But looking to the future:
I still hope to write Twilight of the Gods by the end of the year, which is the prequel to Hungry Gods and Identity Crisis: Book Two.
And I continue to simplify and focus my writing career goals looking forward. I think if I do these rather easy things for the foreseeable future, I'll be doing pretty damn well for myself:
1. Publish 2 to 3 books a year, every year.
Period. This year I've already gotten out Hungry Gods, The Prince and the Darkness, and Dreams of Flying, and it's just now June!
2. Double my overall sales from one year to the next.
This one I have less direct control over, but I think it's a realistic and ultimately successful expectation. I figure if this trend does continue--selling twice as many books this year as last year, and twice as many next year as now--then I could be making a decent living from writing in about five years, maybe even enough to ween myself off of a day job. Not a Hollywood, one-in-a-million instant best-seller story, but a realistic goal and certainly one I can live with.
Increasing the availability and media forms of my work help accomplish this. This means not being exclusive to one outlet (*cough*cough* Amazon *cough*) and diversifying with ebooks, paperbacks, and audiobook versions, as well as writing in multiple genres.
3. Continue to work both sides of the fence: indie publishing and getting stories into magazines and anthologies. My story "Green-Eyed Monster" has been picked up for Meerkat Press's "Love Hurts Anthology" and I have a couple more in circulation with high expectations.
4. Focus on the single most important aspect of writing: WRITING.
But what about marketing?! you might ask. In my opinion, over-rated. But if you want to make real money, start up your own indie book marketing outfit. I bet the marketing side of the indie author boom is making five-times what indie authors themselves are making. Every Tom, Dick, and Harry has their own "book marketing and tweeting service" that they're happy to let you pay them for. And I'm not convinced they help all that much. But that's just me.
When I get half a million words out there, I'll start marketing. Until then, what's the point?
Okay, that's it for me. This post has been two or three that I've had in mind combined to "save time," but I've sure been out here on the patio typing away for a long time. In fact, the sun is now cloaked behind some grey clouds and a nice, moist breeze. Looks like rain...
Thursday, May 28, 2015
Conspiracy Newsletter Sign-Ups and Free Audiobook Offer
image from aquarianradio.com
There's a lot happening on my side of the universe, and much of it I'm trying to get done before I get swallowed into a black hole. What the hell does that mean? For those who don't know, I'm on a countdown to a deployment into the Middle East and trying to tie up a lot of loose ends before I get there, and I'm nearly done. Obviously, this whole life-altering change of venue will have a big impact on my family and "real" life, which come well before my writing life, so... A lot of gear-changing going on right now and for the near future.
For today, I'm just here to post two things of many that have been happening lately:
1. My new "Conspiracy Newsletter" now exists, which you can sign up for in the left upper corner of this blog, and/or by clicking this link. I can safely promise not to bombard you with emails through this medium, as I will barely have time to write new material, much less mess around with cyberspace. But from time to time, I will use this as a means of keeping in touch with my readers and those interested in what book is coming next, when something new is out, and with occasional priority offers and deals.
2. Which also includes a first crack at a free download of the new TARNISH audiobook, narrated by the talented Todd Menesses. In the next few weeks I'll be sending out my first Conspiracy Newsletter and including a chance at a limited number of free downloads, so if you're not on the list yet, I suggest you sign up!
I've also produced a couple more paperback editions of ebooks recently, and also had my most successful book signing event to date just a couple weeks ago, but haven't had time to blog about them. I obviously have other pressing matters to attend to, which I should actually be working on right now. So, I better be signing off for now...
But don't you forget to sign up! Thanks for reading!
Tuesday, May 19, 2015
A Fantasy Epic Comes to Audiobooks
At long last, my 400-page coming-of-age fantasy adventure TARNISH comes to life as a 15-hour audiobook!
This book was contracted for a long time to a voice producer who was stricken with a bad case of Real Life and became too busy with his day job and family to complete the contract. But I hold him no ill will for not being able to finish and he and I were brothers by the end. And it all turned out great in the end anyway, for next I found Todd Menesses, who is a tremendous voice talent. He's done an amazing job with TARNISH and we're already talking about him doing HUNGRY GODS next.
So if you're into listening to your fantasy adventures, give this one your ears!
This book was contracted for a long time to a voice producer who was stricken with a bad case of Real Life and became too busy with his day job and family to complete the contract. But I hold him no ill will for not being able to finish and he and I were brothers by the end. And it all turned out great in the end anyway, for next I found Todd Menesses, who is a tremendous voice talent. He's done an amazing job with TARNISH and we're already talking about him doing HUNGRY GODS next.
So if you're into listening to your fantasy adventures, give this one your ears!
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